Yumbo-Yak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Save the Earth]

OK

Sorry BN, i'm not feelin it...tha beat needs a little more to it, and ur rappin' just seems like someone forced u to do it like u just didn't really want to. Almost like it was a school assignment and...I dunno man, u can do better.

anyway, keep it pimpin'

Broken-Needle responds:

hmmm... not sure wut u mean, I gave this a certain tone 2 ma' voice to make it seem like I'm teachin' a lesson, plus I didn't realy rap, I more of spoke over da beat cuz I wanted 2 make it clear and seem like I'm teaching ma' listeners. Anyway man thanks for letting me know what you saw was wrong, I'ma try an see wut u mean but I'm not really sure, thanks for not hatin' and givin' me good scores and thanks for the support,
Save the bees
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Life Ain't Easy]

good but get timing down!

Get ur timing, a beat like that needs like perfect timing and when u come in whispering while u were talkin, u needed to do something, i dunno what it is but that just didn't sound good at all, but overall as a trak it is good.

keep it pimpin'
ps i wanna become part of ndp how do i do it

Broken-Needle responds:

Ye da timing was sorta' off, but dun worry 'm working on sleep the cousin of death, trying to remake it and that will have good timing. o n man ppl got confused, I ain't part of NDP, I ain't even that close 2 'em, I jus ocasionaly talk 2 187, an' I simply try an' help out. to get in wit NDP u'll have to talk 2 'em on aim and all, not much 2 do wit me. But man thanks for the review, good scores and support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[I Am What I Am...]

BONGO!

CAN U HEAR THAT?
it's a bongo, the most exciting instrument ever lol

wow, this is tha shit, cuz it sounds different than anything u've made thus far, for that simple fact i love it, keep it up

Lil-Saynt responds:

i will man...im learnin different styles of music man...thanks yumbo

~1~

[Fail To Understand]

TOO MANY CLAPS

at tha start when u got all those claps its a bit much, to me, but other than that it was awesome!

awesome like leaving me in a state of awe! u feel me
in tha mid when u put all tha claps together it fit nicely though,

also how do i join tha ndp club i really wanna join.
lol just bullshittin' bout tha club but i wanna be part of da ndp i need a home. i'm just floatin around out here tell me what i need to do

keep it pimpin

Lil-Saynt responds:

well...u gotta tlk to reven abt that man...but if it was me...ill say...bring sumthing new to the table...that will blow my mind...then we'll tlk..but thats just me lol...hit up reven...hes the owner of ndp

b ezy
~1~

[BN vs Dj-Kringe]

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is HOT!!!
that beat is all that, and then u fuckin' rip it staight tha fuck up! and at tha end u had me crakin up. damn. I dunno man, i really enjoyed that, keep it up!

keep it pimpin!

Broken-Needle responds:

thanks man, I liked it too, lol. I was laughin so hard when I listened 2 it afta' I uploaded it... I also love the fact that this was all one take and was a freestyle and it came out pretty good, lol. Well thanks for the perfect scores, good review and support man,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Sleep the cousin of death(prev]

keep it up

yo man, that kid at tha beginnin has tha right voice for a track like this, like a few people before me, all u guys need to work on is tha vol of his voice, but other than that it was all that, then u come in and just tear it up man tha beat kinda overtakes ur voice when u come in though, but not by much, all in all it was a good track

keep it pimpin

Broken-Needle responds:

hell ye, thanks man. I'm still working on this track wit him, iz his first and he did pretty good. Ye the volume was fucked cuz he kept moving to and away from the mike. Iz gna b perfect when we done wit so check ma' page in a week or so, It'll b up by den. Anyway thanks 4 da good review, good scores and support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Crying heart]

This is tha shit

Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for Crying heart, raising its score from 4.29 to 4.38.

now see...that is exactly what i been talkin' about since u been up here, get a beat that fit to ya voice and ride!

u did that exactly, this is that basis that alot of other guys who try to rap need to go on.

a couple o things need work, but i ain't even gonna go there, experience will fix all that, take a minute to just relax and let tha light shine playa! Let it SHINE!!!

ohh, and one more thing, keep it pimpin'

Broken-Needle responds:

lol, the light is so bright, lol. I been practicing ma' flow, plus this beat by The-Orkestrator AKA ragekid is real good so I can flow on it easier. Man I can't believe this day came, lol all 10's from u, lol, thanks fo' da 5, the review, the support and the download I believe,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[BN FEAT. Lejin- Solve it]

Get on beat BN!

BN u gotta get on beat, u would be that shit if u will get on beat! GET ON BEAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for BN FEAT. Lejin- Solve it, raising its score from 3.78 to 3.90.

Much love dough, playa, get on beat and when u do, pussy's beware, bn gone murda ya

Broken-Needle responds:

I think I'm retarded or somethin' I can't fuckin tell how to get on beat, I have no fuckin clue. Well anyway thanks fo' da 5, good scores, review and support
*Vote or Die*
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Let's go BN edition(diss)]

Bad editing

Sorry dude, but that editin' was kinda horrible, lol
tha editing was bad, but tha idea was good, u should try a different beat, u need a beat that caters to ur voice, tha beats u pickin r too hard, u feel me, i think that is ur problem, try a rider kinda beat, somethin a little more laid back cuz u can still show ur teeth without that hard beat ragin in da back

Broken-Needle responds:

I see, I've been lookin' for hard beats on purpose thinkin' dat rider beats won't go good but if u think dey r gna fit ma' voice I'll try it, cuz u been givin' me good advice ma' whole time here. Well anyway thanks fo' da review, good scores, I believe u 5d it and the advice
*Vote or Die*
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Diamonds In My Mouth *V*O*D*]

SMALL WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOLY CRAP! I didn't know it was u, i was listenin, and it was like damn it sounds good, so i scrolled down to see what else i could check out, and low and behold, GUITAR FIRE! I was like damn, ain't this some stuff.

hot track here
Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for Diamonds In My Mouth *V*O*D*, raising its score from 0.00 to 5.00.

come check out my new stuff.

YoungBreeze responds:

I President Breeze have selected none other than Yumbo-Yak to join my cabinet. With you on my side we can win the war on Haterz. We must all pull together and VOTE so that these tracks that we issue to the public are respected as the works of art that they trully are! Voting on each others tracks will help keep the energy levels on NG healthy and it will inspire all artist to want to put out more! Let us cease all hating and lets the beats bang untill we are all deaf! XD!
Thanks for the review man!
President Breeze
BlockBurna
BITCH!