Yumbo-Yak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Upcoming Demo]

Buzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Get rid of that buzz add some more guitars, a little variation on the drums and u got gold!

I read u use FL studio
If u put that guitar in as a channel, u can have that particular channels volume turn all the way down when the buzz starts, just a suggestion.

Stealth-Emergence responds:

hmm I might have a try at that, though someone suggested a soundcard issue I'll look into that see if I can run my guitar Through FL, so far I've only been using FL for my drums, and have only used it on one track so far "Drwon in the fountain of youth"

Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Peace Out!

Stealth

[Drown in the fountain of youth]

love the title.

The song does the title justice
It sounds like an old black and white move when u stand over the fountain, and oh look, someone pushes u from behind, that was great, keep it up

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Thanks! man glad you liked it

Your stuff was cool too!

Thanks for your review

Peace Out!

Stealth

[Apocalypse On The Horizon]

I'm not much into rock...

I don't usually listen to rock but it did sound good, i'll give u that, if I were to make a solid rock beat, it would probably sound like that.
good job

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Cool man listen to rock more I insist, almost all musics good though!

Glad you liked and thanks for your kind words!

Peace Out!

Stealth

[Enter:]

strings too loud...distortion ensured...

Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 3 for Enter:, raising its score from 0.00 to 3.00.

[TheElope]

That was good

I am yumbo-yak, and i have taken the opportunity to listen to music that has been cast away from the group(ergo...given a 0) for whatever reason people just didn't vote or gave u a zero, but i will give u a 4, raising it's score to 4.

[_-={An Ambitious War}=-_]

Another masterpiece

I swear if i turn around and a war is going on behind me its so your fault
I see a battle starting, i can see 2 individuals on i don't know if they were once friends or not but now they r enemies and they both will stop it nothing to defeat the others, other troops r of little importance, they will be mowed down until they get to each other and have the climatic battle that is destined to take place
(The strings double over)
they meet, around them there r troops fighting but it is like they r on a plateu, for they stand for a minute looking at each other, no expression. At the same time they charge and begin to battle,
(The gong at the end)
One wins...but it is not the one we were hopping for...or is it...

I love this piece, make more.

MaestroRage responds:

Ah, the ever classic showdown scene. It gives me chills every time I imagine it. Two best friends torn apart by different beliefs and duties, to have cleaned their blades with their own tears and the blood of their once friends. To bury their own bretheren with a taste of hatred in their mouths.

I'm glad you liked it, I think i'll take a little break from epic war for a while, and try making something a little more peaceful. However I am thinking of spitting out one more battle piece, and i'm hoping to make that one as brutal as they come! Hope to see you then ^^.

Thank you for the review and story, both appreciated.

[Da Darkness Within (Preview)]

HOLY SHIT!

HOLY SHIT!
this is the shit
HOLY SHIT!
this is the shit
keep it pimpin', i can't wait for da whole thing.
HOLY SHIT!

Lil-Saynt responds:

LOL im glad dat u lyked it bruh but dere wont be no whole thing. i accidently erased it when i was fixin my pc :-(. lol but thanks tho man good lookin out.

b ezy pcz

Lil Saynt ~7~

[the original ''piano midget'']

This is Hot

this is really really good for a first submit
Come check out my first submit, and u'll see what i mean

it is on page 2, on the right hand side of the page right above rating, name, etc.

[Doomsday 2 (S&K Final Boss)]

I Remember that song

I Remember that song, it was one of my favorites in S&K
U Did it Justice!!!!
That is exactly as i remember it if not better, that was perfect, It makes me want to cry...

_Yumbo-Yak_

Hex72 responds:

Thank you. :) This shows me that the work paid off.

[Flames of War]

good but u need more!

When i heard the start i was like AWWW YEAH, THIS IS GONNA BE CRUNK!!!!
Then the strings came in and i was like AWWW YEAH, THIS IS GONNA BE CRUNK!!!!

But...it wasn't crunk, it was like half crunk(lol)
The talent is there add more, i don't know what u tell u to help out, but it needed more oomph,
One thing i can definitly say is that it is too repetitive u have to constantly have variation to keep your fans running back.

Come check out my stuff, maybe it would be better to hear than to read, and also check out my man, Greeksta-69, his beats be bangin' he gave me an inspiration or two for a few of my tracks.

_Yumbo-Yak_

MattBlade responds:

Tatally agree bro i definately needed sum more in this track, u sould have saw me going through every last thing in fl to make it work but i need sum help from an elite personel in this area nothing would work on this song so if any would like to help ill let someone finish it for me.