keep it up, but loose da claps
Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for ~As I Rise~, raising its score from 2.50 to 3.33.
those claps were a little too loud for me, but that isn't tha point, this was hot, u feel me, go check out my boy Broken-Needle, i think he needs a little guidence, maybe u can give him some advice that he could use.
keep it pimpin'
yea i forgot to fix up da claps man.... but thanks tho... ill see wassup wit BN too!
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Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for Quick Beat, raising its score from 3.00 to 3.40.
I don't let deez hataz keep my nigga's from gettin' da votes, n da reviews dey deserve, keep it up my nigga.
i will yumbo thanks bruh... i dont kno y why NG hatin but i hv a feelin dat dis is just da beginning!!
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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My computer was messed up for a while, I get back and look at ya!
My Boy, all grown up, and ready for da big big world!
I just looked at all ur latest, and deeZ r pimpin' fo' sho'!
Keep it up, only thang i gots ta say bout it all is add more than a piano, u can arpegiate almost anything and it sounds good, by tha way, come check me out, i put a classical track up, i don't know if it qualifys as classical but, it got major piano in it, something i think u'll like. Keep it pimpin' home slizzle!
yea man as i learn more.... i get better... but i feel dat i can get a whole lot better den where im at now...da piano is now officially my 2nd favorite instrument (1st fav is drums):)... but thanks for da review n ill check u out man
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Dat was WAK!
I ain't hatin' or nothin', but dat was wak!
I'm still crakin' up dough, it was funny, it was funny as hell, but it was wak, and i'll tell u why.
First, it ain't dat u done took a big beat, already made and put ur voice on it.
It's because u did it wrong, all u did was take da lyrics, and modify a couple of words.
and secondly it wasn't on beat, plus wit a beat like dat u can't be all like wispering on it, ur voice gots ta be heard.
Modifing the hook is alright, but that should be all that u modify, the lyrics should have been all you, not taking it and changin' a couple words, all you. and make it on beat, man, honestly...I dunno if u can do it. Not trin' to be mean, but can u do it? Every song is off beat, I'm still in your corner, but if u don't start makin' it on beat, i dunno what i'm gonna do. Unless u want it all to sound that way, if u do no problem, that's not an issue, but like we've said before, that's not what u want, this is the last review i'm gonna put that in, Step ya game up.
Wait until u git a chance to make ur voice heard, don't settle for what u can do in the fasted amount of time, or because u have an idea and because of the circumstance u can make ur voice heard, wait, and when u can lay ur voice on da track right, it will all be gravy.
Keep it pimpin,
lol, yah dis track was whack, but its supposed 2 b a diss n simple lyrics, the reason y it was rushed is because I was b-in dumb by tellin' everybody da lyrics n 1 o da ppl was bout 2 use my lyrics in his own song n call it his so it was basically a race n dat persons name is Oleg so I changed da original target (Young Joc) to Oleg who ever1 dat knows him hate him xcept 4his boy friend(Oleg was gna make da diss 2 me) diss was weak i kno an i kno itsounds like im makin' xcuses but dis 1 wasn't my fault, anyway thanks 4 da review,
BN out
U gettin' there.
U done fixed that voice problem, good, now make it on beat, and that was a good beat, keep it up
That was an awesome beat, wit a beat dat hard, put some rage in your voice, If da beat is hard make ur voice match it, da first half was all dat, just needed to make it on beat, it would have been perfect, the part when ur voice faded a bit, and went back to dat poet feel, ehhhh. but overall this is what i need to hear from u. Make it on beat, and have ur voice fit the feel of da song. I need to find my software for my "mic" when i find it...its on!
k, ima make some nice hit soon wit all yo tips, thanks alot, wenu get dat mike i wna c wut u put out hit me up wen u do, thanks 4 ya positive feedback n good review,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
u still need some work...
I was readin' ur other comments to ur reviews, so i am going to write this just to write it, as always its gonna be what u need to do to become better, i know from readin' that it was ment to be what it was ment to be, however i mention something that u'll look at and it will be like, dude, i didn't notice, or something, u feel me.
n-e way, The echo u added to ur voice, can be a good thing or it can be a bad thing, use it the right way, and it can add so much to a track it ain't even funny, but be careful, it could equally spell disaster for an otherwise pimpin' track.
Like i said in my other ones, u sound like a poet
and there really wasn't much of a beat to go on, i can tell u got potential wit all if ur openings, unless the entire openings r samples u find from somewhere, u got that skill to make a good beat, listen to some of my halloween openings, they r samples but there r like 10 different samples i mesh together to make it sound as one.
Your metronome(tha clap), if u make a beat first and keep the metronome at a steady pace, it will be easier to make a rhyme.
And last but not least, If u listen to Lil-Jon ever, u know that nigga be yellin' and shit...U think when he in tha studio recordin' that the yellin' he be doing, matches exactly wit dat track at da correct volume every time? Hell no, he edits his voice, volume wise, to not overpower da track, and not to be swallowed by tha track
ur tracks sound like ur up on da mic, whisperin' or somethin', if u got tha sound guard, or whatever, let loose man, talk louder, yell, do what u have to do to get ur voice recongnized, and not to have it distorted, get back from da mic and talk louder. I want to hear u man.
n-e way, thats the just of it, come check me out i got some new shit, u know what i'm sayin'
Keep it pimpin'
I c, da echo I tink helped in dis 1 cuz i was talkin ova dabeatnot rly going wit it(like a poet) it cuz o my back injury i had 2 do dat. I do basicaly whisper my tracks cuz I didn't rly wna b heard by my parents but now im ova dat so hopefullymynext u'll hear me, I'm also gna get a better mike cuz dis 1 is 4 gaming but i neva use it 4 gamin jus raps so I feel abit stupid wen i make my raps, dat also contributes 2 me not truly expressin myself. Yah my intro's are my own u could tell cuz i used da same uzi in my previous 1, anyway thanks 4da advice n da best reviews, da honest 1's, o n i will check yo work out as soon as im dun writin dis,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What tha fuck is this shit?
What happened to tha lil-saynt i once knew?
I guess he was replaced by this mastermind of da track, NIGGA!
This shit is ridin'! Ur skills r worthy yung jedi!
See, this is y u can't just leave for like half a month, ya boys change, and u ain't there, when u get back it's all weird...
But dis ain't weird, all that that i wrote up top is BS, this shit is hot homie, dis is da first track i check after my short absence and i ain't disappointed man, Unfortunatly, my job keeps alot of my attention, so i won't be addin' tracks as often as b-4, however, keep check every once in a while and u may find somethin' new. I got a couple of new ones that need some reviews man. Keep it pimpin'
haha da Lil-Saynt u know is still here. he just gettin better at wut hes doin bruh lol!!! Yumbo wut happened to ya man???!?!?! its been awhile 4real tho! at least its good 2 hear frm ya bruh again! :) but yea man good lookin out on da review homie! n ill check u out man!
b ezy
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There u go!
Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for - The New East Coast -, raising its score from 3.33 to 3.75.
How dare u make a song so good!
keep it pimpin'
ahah thnaks bro
repetative...
Yo playa, what it do?
Da beat is all dat...but u da main one dat be tellin' me to add variation and stuff and den u make dis...
U didn't change it at all, like i said b4 it's a tight beat, but u gotta re-make dis wit more variation, get some more samples from Tony u know what i'm saying, that alone would have made da track better.
Don't get it twisted dough, u know u my boy, i ain't hatin'...I'm just sayin'...
Keep it pimpin'
yeah this was the first time i tried something like this sorry man il try harder next time my bad
Now this name fits the song!
unlike the pokemon battle b4, this sounds exactly like a battle where whoever is on the offence has just 'obliterated' the opposing force, good job man and keep it up.
keep it pimpin'
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