Yumbo-Yak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Dominance Is Ominate]

This is awesome...oh yeah, it's lil saynt

again, u bring it, need i say more?

Lil-Saynt responds:

no more said..i getcha yumbo :) thanks

[Give up an leave (4 da battle)]

U still got a little work...

This was one of those beats that was all that, and u needed to bring some rage into it wit ur vocals, now that i got my mic...I can kinda see why it's hard to stay on beat
but u gotta figure it out, i think i'm gonna give up on vocals, but my beats r gonna only get betta,
love tha end when u say da beat ran out

just 2 things to work on homie, get more on beat, cuz this didn't sound bad, u just need to get on beat more, and make ur vocals clearer.

Broken-Needle responds:

ok so da stayin on beat im still workin' on, an i already fixed the clarity problem cuz i got a new/real mike. Earlier I had 1 those desktop 1s but w/e. Ya shud give vocals another try even though it's alot mo' work u shud still give it anotha' chance, if ya don't I'll still keep a lookout 4 ya beats cuz I kno dem shits gonna b hot. Da beat ran out is fuckin halarious I still laugh whenever I hear it. Well anyway thanks 4 da good scores an' da review,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Stayin True To My Music]

PERFECT

U know what sounds sound good together...I almost want to cry...

Lil-Saynt responds:

lol dont cry now...im gotten awhole lot betta in da past 4 months man...im glad im known on NG! ^_^ thanks for the support homie!

[Trap In Your Pain & Suffering]

U should try classical

I think u should try to make a classical track after hearing that, u got hip hop down homie. I know it sounds crazy, but u have a habit of having alot of variation in ur tracks that is what makes them so good, If u've ever listened to any clasical music on dis site u know that it is difficult to pull off a good sounding classical peice, but i think u could be tha one to do it.
After hearing what u did wit tha strings in dis track dough, i kinda wanna hear a classic track.

Don't get it twisted, i don't just cruize a round lookin' for classic, it's just that i can hear a classic feel in this track alot.

Lil-Saynt responds:

u kno what...imma aim at Classical one day bruh... i kno a lil abt it...but ill do it one day man

[A Time To Step Up (Preview)]

WOW

and no, not world of warcraft...

This is tha shit, damn.

Lil-Saynt responds:

lol thanks yumbo...really preciate it...maybe you n i cn collab one day =]

~1~

[Tears of the Crying Mountains]

wtf!?

U Got alot to learn about fl...
don't make ur kick so loud it alters tha sound of everything in this track when it hits so hard, and it has a very 'cut n paste' sound to it if u don't use tha piano roll.
I would definately like to hear this remade in about 3-4 months after u learn more about fl, and believe me, U got alot to learn about fl...

bdan3 responds:

u dont even kno! u donts even! dont disrepect! btw i like the cryin babeeeee in yo sucks.

[Broken Needle vs. Humpers003]

nice, but tone it down

I see u been working on everything, and this was really close to perfect.

the voice matched tha beat, but it overpowered it, alot, that is easily fixed by simply lowering tha volume on ur voice

work a little on making it on beat and dis would have been everythang, I see u makin' good dough, so

Thanks for your vote, Yumbo-Yak! You voted 5 for Broken Needle vs. Humpers003, raising its score from 3.63 to 3.78.

MAKE MORE!

Broken-Needle responds:

no problem bruh, u da 1dat made me get to thisshit, thanks to all ya help as u can see I listened alot, although never used thatthing on fl dat u said helps stay on track cuz I wont always have dat so w/e. Anyway thanks man an expect to see more shit like this but better. Anyway thanks fo' da good scores, ya 5, ya review an all ya help o n ya support too,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[UNIT (BN and G.I. G)]

U Guys r boring...

Constructive critisism homie, your voice were very monotonous, which is very boring, i listened to tha lyrics and dey was hot, but ya voices were boring, and ya'll wasn't on beat.

U fixed alot of da problems from tha last ones i heard, but u still learnin'

Pretty much all u gotta work on is gettin' on beat, and becoming un-monotonous

Keep it pimpin'
Yumbo

P.S. Voices too loud, in comparison to tha music

Broken-Needle responds:

ya da better version is on ma' myspace dis 1 is jus NG version. The monotonous was on purpose, thought it wud have sounded hotter guess not. Ya stayin on beat is my problem, I still got much room to improve on, hope ma' next will fill up much of that space, anyway thanks for the constructive review and the good scores man,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[U goin' down (remake)]

GET ON BEAT

Come on...

Broken-Needle responds:

lol, this was a one try remake cuz i felt like i owed it to people that listened to my original version,
Like I said I need to learn how to stay on beat, anyway thanks for taking your time and writing another review,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[~Stomp All Haters~]

Good God!

Leaps and bounds, thats all i got to say, i remember tha dayz when u was new to da game, and shit.
Now, i hate to say it, but u may have surpassed me. DA MASTER, BOWS DOWN TO THA DECIPLE...OR SOME SHIT...
i done got good, and on tha same tip, we made different kinds of music, it's all hip hop in tha end, but it ain't tha same, come check me out, i just posted a song up today, and check out the last few entrys i subbed, i think u'll c what i mean.

Keep it pimpin.

Lil-Saynt responds:

surpassed you...hmm i probably hv man...lol

b ezy man
~1~